- Tell a story with a clear beginning, middle and end;
- Portray distinct characters who change in some way;
- Involve action which brings about character change;
- Show your ability to work in continuity style;
- Develop a miss-en-scene appropriate to the subject;
- Employ a creative and appropriate use of diegetic sound; and,
- Use titles and credits clearly and effectively
Before and fore most, we all talked through each of our stories and decided on which was best and simplest - the most achievable. We therefore picked James' short story, "The Good Buried Within your Heart" Very shortly after choosing a story to work on, we settled on what roles we would be taking:
- Pierre Joseph - Producer
- Joel Macklin - Director/Director of photography
- James Mahon - Script writer/Editor
- Eddis Ozcelik - Recce/Lighting
- Miguel Fonseca - Sound/Set design
I had always planned to nominated myself as scriptwriter but I felt it was only fair that, James would work on his story. Soon after the synopsis were sorted, as was the script, schedule and locations. We went into the first tutorial meeting hoping we had done enough. However, hoping we had done way more! Eddie was completely brutally honest with us, which I appreciate deeply. He really made us think about everything. We spent the rest of the day doing work with each other as a group. It was then when things really started to fall into place. We discussed things like professionals and always gave our opinions. The only problem i really had was with the story. Although it was a brilliant and realistic script, I felt that the story was too grand and too much of a sensitive subject to tell in just 5 minutes including credit time. That was just my opinion and the script maintained the same.
When we went into the rough cut tutorial, we were well prepared and had already finished the beginning and ending scenes. We were praised for our work so far but also received little criticism. Helena was also impressed with the sound plan I had made for the film.
We filmed the beginning and ending sequences very rapidly. It was the first time working with the actors who played Akan and Akan's father. It was really great finally getting to work. I was a little annoyed because the boom mic was not the best and was making a weird humming noise. This however, was not noticed at all during editing.
We were going to have a long Christmas break, and so we were planning to do most of the filming during that time. However, we were taken by surprise when we found out that the loan store was going to close the day after we found out. We then spoke to Helen who was also unaware that this was happening, and she helped us by speaking to the people that worked at the loan store. This clearly messed with our scheduling and things had to be done very quickly.
We then shot the main part the following day. We were all under lots of stress but were able to work properly. It was an eventful, long day, but we managed to get everything done, It was important that we did so, because these parts were crucial for he film. Personally, I found it enjoyable but also very hard, as I had to record the sound, watch sound levels on the zoom mic as well as writing down a sound report. In terms of set design I made sure the flat looked appropriate for the type of characters they were and what it said about them.
So that was the big part done, but we had to meet up for one more day after the new year to get some pick up shots and also another dialogue scene. I had to make sure that the set was identical to previous shooting and that when I really pulled out my guns for detail! Because this was during the christmas, break I was a little put down because I had no Boom nor zoom microphones to work with, and so I was afraid that sound for this one last dialogue scene would be horrible. Luckily for us, James had gotten a microphone for Christmas. I was most chuffed because of this. After that day, we had wrapped.
I was glad that we had completed filming, but days later the whole team met up for the editing. We decided that we would all sit in with James. For this I gave him the sound plan I had created in pre-production, and assisted him but getting the sounds, and downloading some when needed.
Finally the film was complete. You can see "Benevolence" by clicking the link Below:
On the 15th January 2013, the whole of the film class met up for a screening of all the finished products. I wasn't too confident going in there because I am always very critical of my own work. However, we mainly received good reviews and and very minimal criticism.
I now do believe that our project was a massive success. I can only thank my group for being such great team workers and keeping morales up, even when we were faced with a bad situation. I am truly pleased with our work and feel as though we have achieved plenty!